I liked the train lines in multiple windows I also liked the aesthetic. The imagery was pretty and trippy. I thought it was clever that the beats were timed, particularly when the protagonist was walking down the stairs.
All sections... You’re v.consistent
The latter section when she's in her room
When the cameras spit on the train wires and the things were zappin around
i like that you used a small screen on top of other videos and the flashing inverted colours
The background and the visuals of the centre
Color contrast within the frame within frame shots, additionally I really enjoyed the syncing of movement and imagery to sound particularly when both inner and outer shots matched or reflected the beat or sound.
I love the kaleidoscope effects you did through out. I also appreciate that you began and ended with the ducks in the pond. It felt like that gave your video closure.
Love the background patterns, love Hannah lip-syncing, amazing video footage of nature
The scenes focusing on her facial expressions were engaging - I felt I could empathise. Train wire bit was good too. And the synchrony of the flashing background with music was effective.
At the beginning when the scenes shift, snap and change in time with the music.
The lip syncing bit
The synchronised filters, the montage of woodland scenes and the train taking off.
the editing style (it fits really well with the genre and style of music) and the ink in water with the kaleidoscope effect
I DID
The square on square thing
I like the effects of the rail lines, and the merge of the shots
The backgrounds when they’re mirrored horizontally
So many but I remember when the box in the middle started shifting sizes that particularly worked really well with the whole dreamy psychedelic thing
the background videos, they were really trippy and cool. it reminded me off the Skins opening credits.